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Happy holidays to you too.

screaming, inside of my mind
leaping, outside of my skin
hit me and bruise me
believe me or lose me

dreaming of flying away
crying through day
fading into disarray
making it reality

strangely, you were mine
bravely, I fought time
kill me and leave me
stealing or deceiving

freeing my arms of these chains
I'm slipping away

trying to heal all these veins

where blood once sprayed 

 

and the tree doesn't glow

it won't even shine

this christmas is the worst

with our blood splattered chimes 

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I'm having, easily, one of the worst holidays ever.

don't get too depressed now.

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  • toomysterious
    February 16, 2008

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    Definitely chilling.

    This poem leaps out at the reader. There is so much turmoil and madness in it. I see fighting snd rage and discontent, all those wonderful things about the holidays.


    • Ebyru
      February 19, 2008
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      lol. I was afraid all the readers/writers on here didn't like it because they liked christmas too much.

      glad for you comment though, thank you. ^-^