Sunny and bright, sparkling free,
College finally over and I can just be me.
Spend time with my friends, drink and have fun,
Never feel lonley, never feel I'm the only one.
I hug so deeply and rember every moment,
Wish the summer would never end.
But as in all thing in life the sparkles ended,
I wasn't free.
I was in a car, going to University.
Pictures on the wall, remind me of you,
Pictures on the wall, remind me of me.
Tears streaming, emotions run wild,
Stress is driving me crazy as I sit here at night.
But as I rember our spirits will be yet again free.
And at christmas it just will be you and me.
I come home, excited, waiting for you.
But the call never comes.
Alone. All alone.
I'm sitting here alone, on my bed,
Not sure what to do.
Stare at my phone willingly.
I don't know what I've done wrong,
I don't know how this can be,
My spirit is still trapped,
I am not really me.
You have all moved on, but my heart has stayed,
And sat broken on the floor next to everyone,
that I missed and wanted, and miss still more.
But it still remains broken upon the floor.
New Years will be fun,
Alone. All alone.
Start the New Year as it'll continue to be.
I miss you, I want you, I wish it could be.
But your used to life without me.
In my dreams I will keep you, locked up inside.
And wait till you fix my broken heart.
I miss you, I want you. But I still lay here.
Alone. All alone. Waiting, just waiting to be free.
Author notes
This is all about how it's been like to come home from university
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Best! by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended January 14, 2008, 56 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The piece reminded me of "Pictured Of You" by The Last Goodnight...
I liked the way you have written it..all a mix and jumble of emotions...
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Thankyou *big smiles*
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Your words run deep and are very emotional. No one can mistake that great emotion was a huge part of the creation of this piece. I do think, however that the red font is a bit harsh on the eyes on this page. Perhaps a white text would be better? Thank you for entering. Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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Tar for the advice. My eyes aren't very good with colours, so this is the easiest font for me to read on the background. Didn't think others would find it hard. Thanks loads anyway
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very nice!!!
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Thankyou
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Thankyou. I haven't wrote anything for so long, I'm just glad people are still enjoyinh
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