We count minutes,
hours, and days
Rushing around
in our own ways
Gathering up nothing
but lost time
Take off your watch
and don't whine
Feel the segments
of time go away
Makes all the pressure
just go away...
A contest entry
- Free Verse, No Line Limits, Subject - TIME... by Cupcrazy.
1000 points, ended January 15, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very nice piece. I Liked your straightforward appraoch to time. Thanks for entering, hugs, Bunny
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So True
It is really sad when time pushes us so fast that we can't even take a minute to breathe...You said a mouth full hun...A good pen for the prompt indeed...
Best of Luck
Blessings
~~Cheryl~~
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Thank you for commenting on my poem, "Take Off Your Watch," I am glad that you enjoyed it. So I took the TIME to let you know, thanks again
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