Ah! They met and her heart danced!
Literally! Wings to fly and soar
she did! Indeed!
To heights so high they made her
dizzy! Unfailingly!
With hope and courage she placed
her most prized possession at his
feet! Her heart!
She knew she would never
view the world the same again!
Undoubtedly!
The stars shone so bright in
a night sky filled with lovers
delight! Passionately!
Lovers they became as destiny
aligned daringly with fate.
Two hearts ordained and bound
by loves entwining flame!
He is her Knight and she his
other half. Wholly!
Joined together in loves eternal
ring! Wonderously!
Author notes
Q&a
A contest entry
- Write Me Your Best--- INVITE ONLY by daviscth.
6000 points, ended January 11, 2008, 33 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful write it is such an enjoyable read. I wwish you the best of luck in the contest
RedwingSpirit
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I enjoyed reading this, I was for a minute entangled in the dance
I noticed a few missspellings but nothing major you may want to fix Wondrously! Not sure if you ment shone or shine. But over all this is a good write and nice use of punctuations!
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Thank you so much for posting in my contest. I enjoyed reading this and I wish you the best of luck at judging, Cathy
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