Thoughts;
Flow out,
Forming waves
That radiate.
Extending outward.
Reaching for new readers.
Inspiring new thoughts to form.
Cascading in endless ripples.
Pouring forth over the universe.
The power and beauty of simple words.
Author notes
The Etheree is one of my favored forms. Short, yet effective.
A contest entry
- Form Poetry by Harrisham Minhas.
300 points, ended January 4, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautifully done. Indeed poetic words travel wide and stimulate thoughts.
Thanks for your entry.
Harrisham Minhas
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Beautiful in its simplicity! I like the way you've used the form to convey the meaning. Well done.
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Nicely-structured, with a coherent pattern and well-chosen words--I'm impressed.
Bill
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Nicely done paean to the power of poetry...in a well-chosen poetic form.
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Perfect subject for the form. Well done.
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