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These Walls

Walls of blindness,
   Cover my true self,
But let differences show,
                 ...people judge.
    Do you have walls

       in your eyes?

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20 words on the promp: walls of blindness.

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  • Rmh4933
    November 11, 2008
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    very profound, the walls I put up seem to hurt no one but me


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    December 29, 2007

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    An excellent take on the prompt. Yes so many of us put up these walls. Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene


  • lesbian-in-love
    December 29, 2007

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    I love this piece. It is oh so very true. It is short and straight to the point which I love. Thanks so much for sharing and keep it up.


  • dustookie2
    December 29, 2007

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    Sadly people do judge by their standards and culture many times we miss out on the value because we are blind. Good luck in the contest.