Voids of lightness

I gaze at the stars in the night sky

Twinkling

Dancing across the page of today’s chapter

Abruptly opening the valves of my beating heart

Causing the penetration of emotion

I gaze at the stars in the night sky

Inhaling the drips of tranquillity

Disguised by the estimation of your love

As I walk into the voids of lightness

I wonder

Will you still wait for me?

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Will you still wait for me?

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keepholdingon
January 2, 2008
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I think that this is very well written. "Inhaling the drips of tranquillity."
penman
December 31, 2007
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Excellent
Very well done. A great interpretation of picture. Best of luck in the contest.
raggyann
December 30, 2007
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great luck in the contest
your word choice was fantastic in this poem
CherylAnn
December 29, 2007

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Beautifully written hun,Such great word choices and the emotion is definitely strong...A dang good read here...
Best of Luck
Blessings
~~Cheryl~~
ixtli
December 29, 2007
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You did a very nice job with this prompt. Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering!
Cerulean Sunrise
December 29, 2007

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Love this line - "Disguised by the estimation of your love"

Many can relate to this.
Beautifully poetically rendered.
ixtli
December 29, 2007
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Your prompt is:
"Will you still wait for me?"