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The One

to the apple of my eye
my shining golden star
the twinkle in my eye
my whole world, my light
and the laughter in my soul.

to my firefly
my darling apple pie
my sugarbear, my sweetheart
...and my solid rock.

to he who has captured my heart
who has brought me through
a thick smokecloud of stupidity.

this is to the one who
no matter what never gave up on me
and will be there with me
through thick and thin
the one who has become my very best friend
and forever will be.

this is for the one who loves me.

Author notes

cliche, but gosh I do love him.

whatchu think? :D

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  • lingonberries
    December 30, 2007

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    Sometimes cliches are okay! He should be really happy!
    I espiecially liked this line;
    "who has brought me through
    a thick smokecloud of stupidity."

    Happy NEw Year!


  • Nuage
    December 29, 2007

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    You sound like you love him. Love comes in many forms, many variations.
    This poem came from the heart, the emotions just drip from the words. I liked it very much.