Morning breaks
to a perfect yesterday.
Come away forever
to a beautiful night.
Be mine today
Tomorrow be
someone elses.
A contest entry
- Prewrites Mania by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended March 30, 2008, 84 entries
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Elegant yet simple enough even for those who proclaim they are not romantic
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Simple, direct - and heartbreaking, to me. But then again, one perfect night has to be better than years of average days, and the best way to kill love is to try to keep it exclusively. Well done.
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Wonderfully simple i would say, yet again. I would definitely like to see more of this piece.
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Brava!
\dear Poet, For whatever reason this reminds me of the David Bowie song 'Let's Dance'...Your words (so simple) explain it all to me...and I grab the moment!
Wonderful emotion with a few simple words...Brava! Jane -
This poem was simple but yet full of much emotion and meaning. Great job and keep up the great work
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