Truly
believe
this life
song.
Touch
lips,
kiss
tickle
lick, taste
Listen,
love
forever.
Celebrate
play
together
with joy
light
sunshine.
Tomorrow
may be
the
only time
we hear
the
magnetic sound
of
love.
A contest entry
- just about anything :) by nobodys-girl.
300 points, ended April 10, 2008, 56 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i absolutly love the ending. it's something that never really crossed my mind but love does seem to make us mafnetic to the other person doesn't it? thankyou so much for entering my contest and good luck!
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mmm magnetic sound of love you say? I think that is a very beautiful way to descrive the feeling you feel for someone instead of the usual mushy "I love you".
Real different style of writing, yet I think it is perfect!
Just love it!!!
All the best in the co
ntest!!!
Becks
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wow some great reflections on love i like the magnetic sound of love
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This was unbelieveably... unbelieveable.
One of the things I loved about this poem is how you had one or two words per each line. The thing that I loved most about this poem, though, is when you said,
"Tomorrow
may be
the
only time
we hear
the
magnetic sound
of
love."
MAGNETIC!!! Yeah that was great. I loved that. I also love the colors you used for the words and the background.
Thanks for posting this beautiful poem in the list for the Happy Group!
~Pandy
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Oh wow! That is really neat. But the only thing I disagree with is the tomorrow part. Actually......all we have is TODAY! God bless.
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This was adorable.
Plain and simple.
Each little word strung together to make a simply cute piece.
~Restless and True~
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