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Blade

There is a blade
Thin and sharp
Sparkling in the starlight

I bring it to my breast
A silent child in my arms
Cold steel slips between my ribs

I am filled with aching ecstasy
As sanity leaks away
Pooling in the dust at my feet

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  • Carpe Noctem
    January 3, 2008

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    Such power in so few lines. I enjoyed it very much. The wording and flow were perfect together. Thanks for entering, and best of luck!