From your own golden hair, to your blue eyes of the sea.
I fell in love with you, I dream, I wait.
Just to see you come down to the Quarry.
To check on what we are building you.
People fear you, but why?
All I see is a brave and strong king.
I've made the goal to work even harder hours.
Just for you, the king of this land.
But the chaos that once I saw.
Came back, I saw a smirk as you left.
I thought you were pleased and happy.
But alas my heart broke.
As I saw the truth of you.
You killed that old man over there.
His daughter covered in his blood.
Seeks vengeance on your soul.
Oh, King Einon, why must you be this way?
I love you, can't you see that I love you?
As I look around now, with different eyes.
I see my family working to the bone.
So that they can't get the torture gift.
That you bring if no one works.
The children work, the old to the sick.
Work and die in the fields to the mines.
But my heart, young, strong that flutters like the butterflies.
Has been torn, this is my own demise, the tornment that I feel.
Is like your blade that priced it self in my soul.
That is in flames of hate and chaos.
The burning causes my tears at night.
As I toss and turn in my bed, of straw and hay.
For six long years I've worked for you.
All this time in love with you.
But blinded to see the truth.
But this goal has been carved on my chest.
Is my mark to serve you, but it burns.
As I make the strokes with my father's blade.
Blood drips from the tip, the bruise deepens.
My heart beats, as I fall into a dark abyss slumber.
The light of the sun awakes me, to work in the hay.
Where we cut, and cut and cut the hay.
The bruise is now a scar, of a sword.
With the letters: King Einon on the blade.
Some of the people are worried that you put that there.
But I shook my head, and told them.
"No, this is my own demise, my own sacrifice."
The day is now the cool winter's night.
I creeped into your cruel minded castle.
The breeze of hate and fear run through me like chills.
Laughter and cheering are heard from the halls.
Of this castle from which I helped built.
Back when I was a wee lass.
I remember where the dinning room was.
And gave a grin, walked forward..
Just to be caught, by the neck.
The hand of an iron glove clutches me tight.
My breath becomes a soft and fluttering sound.
The man, tall and ugly, throws me down.
My eyes, dazed right into your sea like one's.
Your voice, soft and calm whispers in my ears.
A smile on your face, shows a cruel act in your mind.
The next thing I knew I was on your lap?
In your sit? You grin, and laughed.
But all of this is a memory, a dream.
I sit in a cold, dark, deathly corpse hole.
My tears are the only friends that I have.
My punishment is the see my home be burned.
Or I marry you, but what to do?
I'm only a girl, not a women!
But I must to save my love one's.
And maybe save your soul.
I walk, I wait, I go to my demise.
The golden hair, the sea eyes.
Tell me what is worse then death in your castle?
Will I change you, or just be a dirty little secret to you?
From all it is worth, my love is now sealed.
In your hand, to the bed, to this ring.
why are you like this Einon?
A man of cruelty and pain?
Well I hope I give your soul a rest.
Good-bye, to my people.
And hello to the start of my...
Sacrifice that I promised you.
Six years ago..
Author notes
This a poem decaited to the character King Einon, from Dragon Heart, I love this film and yes I did add some things to it but the movie is not mine..
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Bravo!
perhaps you should turn this into a short story or tale, its very entertaining and pulls you in. Strange how love works and how hate flows.

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Well done. An epic of poem. Perhaps it might work just as well as a short story.
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i love this movie




