have you heard people say that misery loves company?
i've learned over time that this doesn't apply to me,
as it eats me alive, i want no one near,
no one needs to see, this hurt and this fear,
the sorrow overwhelms me, i'm slowly falling down,
the only things i take with are my tears and my frown,
misery rips apart at my soul,
a pain too deep, to ever control,
there is no hiding it, you can see it in my eyes,
there's nothing left; this is my demise,
no feelings here, except for the bad,
Misery and Sorrow, the only friends i've ever had.
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what do you guys mean first poem is kinda hard?? i have been writing poems since i was in third grade, that was, hmmm, 8? years ago, ish, ??? thanks for the comments anyways
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Nothings wrong with it this is a very good piece
plus i can relate -
love the rhyme scheme, very nicely done. very deep poem, also. good job! first poems are kinda hard, i know.
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