We kissed
What should have been magic
Was nothing but distasteful.
That one first kiss,
Was nothing but piss
In the mouth.
Wet and gross,
Your tongue on mine,
All I wanted was to puke.
Seconds passed
I pushed you away
For I could not take anymore
Of this filthiness.
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Rawr Monkey
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Comments
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Haha that reminds me of my first kiss.
How horrible.
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GOod luck in your contest! -
wow. haha very good.
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wow.lol
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I like how you made a poem about this, haha. I'm really sorry. Just use him for his money
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Haha, yes sir!
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I am so sorry. *Hugs*
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Haha, thanks.
Don't worry...it's okay.
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