To Mask tears and pain
I gouge my swollen eyes
Author notes
This is inspired by a picture of a distorted face.
A contest entry
- Picture prompt...this is a WEIRD ONE PEOPLE! by O.o.
360 points, ended December 30, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Blink by Tigris.
450 points, ended June 8, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Fasinating, that one would think that the gouging of eyes is like blinking. I'd much prefer the gouging of eyes thanks for your entry
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And interesting and inspired take on the prompt!!!
Takes a deeper look... well done!
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Nothing Like Going To The Source
of the problem. Still quite riveting an offering. Good Luck in the Contest. Thank you for sharing.
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This has left me with a creepy feeling but this is a good dark piece goodlukc in the contest best wishes and much luck
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gosh what a horrible thought.
Great job even though it's kinda shocking!
Best of luck in the conest.
Silverbutterfly
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Ooooh scary! Thanks for entering, you are the first person to write dark...I like that!
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