Perhaps I am deluded
and one-by-one
we are all unincluded.
All alone divisor gone
understanding that we
are not at all included.
If I were unincluded
would myself be undiluted?
Perhaps we are all deluded
and all we are is unincluded.
If I were self-diluted,
would myself be unincluded?
Perhaps I am deluded
and really one by one
we are all included.
A contest entry
- contest for my favorites by Cat.
1400 points, ended January 12, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Humm..the subject chosen here to discusse is very curious yet very true..and the flow and the structure makes it more effective as well..well done...
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Perhaps we're all pecular, but would myself be unincluded?
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i want to run this poem through a sieve after rebeka shakes it and see what accumulates in the bottom- this is clever and weird
and fun
so glad to find it here
m
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i want to shake this poem and make it stop confounding me!
love it though. 
good work and fun to read.
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Perhaps I am self deluded
and one by one
we are all included.
Humm you are very peculiar here while using rythemic words al along..it is creating a beauty in the verse..well done...
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Humm you are very peculiar
Thanks for your comment I appreciate it.
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