into your arms and
through your front door i
found myself swept up in a life
i couldn't keep up with. your
fingers spreading veins across
my body, always leaving room
for more.
your eyes light up when you
look at me. and i'm pretty sure
they don't do that for
anyone else. as much as they
tell me to ignore you
say i can do better and you
aren't worth my time, you
have completely enveloped
my mind. so much so i can't
escape. and i'll always come
back to you, despite the abuse.
A contest entry
- An Abundance of Titles by Mad As Rabbits.
700 points, ended December 30, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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Great write. It was simple, but not overly simple to the point that it needs more description. A good balance, that is hard to achieve but you have done it here! I loved the part about the person's eyes lighting up when they see you.
Thanks for entering.
Love Always,
Caroline
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Reminds
of me n my love Andrew Norwood but he dont hit me just not seeing him and other stuff is hard great write
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