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Deaths Reasoning

Adulterers!
Cheating spouses, toxic affairs,
People doing things without care.
Lying terribly to family and friends,
Nothing more disgusting, then lusts end.
Hammer comes down, they been found out.
A verbal match igniting into a horrendous shout.
Fists fighting,
Mothers crying,
Daddy’s lying,
The other woman lays dying.
Trigger pulled,
Daddy’s fooled,
Mother lost her cool.
She deserves it,
Daddy’s well lit,
Mother’s going down and don’t give a shit.
Many years he played this game,
Battled the bottles and called momma names.
Year after year, everything was the same.
Then last night, mom found out the truth.
Determination set, she had nothing to loose.
So she showed up, and put a bullet in his mistress’s caboose.
Bright eyed lady gasping for air,
Mom shrugged it off & I didn’t care.
Daddy ran for days, but he caught his share.
First degree murder, the woman died.
Mom was real sad and daddy cried.
Cops came to me, so…I just lied…

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A Reason To Kill
Reasons to want to murder someone (No glorifying of illegal acts will be accepted)

aint glorifying it, aint accepting it either but sure is a reason for many who have done it...i was sooooo close.....


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  • CountryCousin
    January 30, 2008

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    Hmm I think.

    I think I would too if I were in the same situation and perhaps I would have shot him too. But then in the end he got what he deserved.


  • Griswold silver member
    January 12, 2008

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    Excellently written honey, put a bullet in her caboose.. ROFL. Nice job honey. I love you...Scott


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 29, 2007

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    this is a powerful write which holds the emotion and the anger and everything needed, well done mom and best of luck


  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    December 28, 2007

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    I like how it seems a bit jumbled. Really well done and perfect fitting in with the contest. Thank you! And lol yeah, you're not the only one who's gotten so close to it.

    Also, "loose" should be "lose".

    ♥ Bandaid

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 28, 2007

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    Yes that is a reason to kill nad I am for one have had the thoughts of murder but it would not be worth it in time they will pay for their sins much love

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