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heartbreak & billiards

*like murder on a quiet street, i'm torn in two..
and i'm not hard to find (ghosts will follow you)

but there will come a time when my stupid faces fade from your mind
and your body will be his some day like it once was mine.

and that's one murder i'll be proud to confess to
no one can say i give no warnings ::

[...god save her from my gun-slinging evil twin...//

the memories of scorching summer ghost town nights
and rainy autumn city days
with me won't mean a fucking thing.
        yes, it is all as it seems ::

((..HOPELESS.))

[[.hopeless//]

GUNSLINGER..
<  i need no introduction  > 
we'll be face to face again one of these black nights,
and if you still feel like this, come darling,
i will show you the one way out,
just sit there and look pretty...

[..i'll just keep my composure..]
let me demonstrate:::




kiss kiss * bang bang


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  • Miss Faith
    June 24, 2008
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    I think I've heard this somewhere before...maybe heard it screamed? hahaha.

    I still love it.


  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    December 29, 2007

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    Uh. Yeah ok then. What did she do? Why was it so bad that you feel like she should be murdered? Gargh.

    ♥Bandaid.


  • Miss Faith
    December 29, 2007
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    Oh you know I love this one!