They say I look like you
Act like you
Smile like you
I love it cause
I love you
I see you
I feel you
I remember you
In my dreams
I am with you
Holding you
I want to be just like you
I want people to see you in me
That way your memory won't die
If your memory dies
I die with you
You are my everything
I am your daughter
A product of you
You see daddy
I turned out
Just like you.
Author notes
This is for my dad, whom I love very much.
A contest entry
- Love Dedications by Blooming Poet.
440 points, ended January 3, 2008, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me Your Best! by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended January 14, 2008, 56 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Goes.......But it has to have emotion by Nikki Rowles.
450 points, ended March 17, 2008, 70 entries
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Comments
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This is a beautiful poem for your daddy. I really enjoyed reading it as I enjoy reading about things that bring joy to others.
Very expressively written.
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very sweet and loveing poem dear
i am sorry for your lost
amazingly said though. -
I wish I was that lucky....my dad hasn't ever spoken to me...and it's not cause he couldn't...good poem though
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Remember one thing if nothing else...
the memory of your father can never die as long as the love you hold for him is alive within you and this I have no doubt of as the love for your father can be clearly felt in each line penned here. You have placed your heart upon the screen fro one and all to see. Thank you for entering. Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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I love it!!
Oh, WearyChild...I love this! What a tribute to your father! I am so glad to see you writing about him. I hope that you write more. He sounds like he was an awesome guy and I would love to read more about him and about your relationship with him.
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The love for and from a father is an amazing thing. i hear it all the time. The famous "you are so much like your dad", or you "have your dads___"
you've expressed your self beautifully in this poem. i am glad you entered my contest, you given me a poem about a different kind of love dedication and a very good one at that. Once again thank you for entering my contest and best of luck to you.
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Brilliant
To have inspired such wonderful words of love, your father must have been an incredible man. You have done him a great honor with your words of love, affection, and admiration. I am sorry he is no longer with you in body, but the feelings you expressed for him will keep him alive in you forever, and that is the greatest love one can ever have. Beautifully written.
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Beautiful. You could not have expressed this emotion any better! So many times people take their parents for granted. I love my dad very much and cherish the time I have with him. My heart goes out to you.
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