a better world than reality
swirls inside my head.
its an idealised version of what is true,
fogging everyday calamities.
leave casual urges for fame, riches and celebrity status
to those who are genuinely, selfishly content,
for we all know that they are are unimportant.
i have my basic components,
the elements that may one day complete me,
just improve it all ten-fold,
and you are left with the essence of my daydreams.
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A lovely poem you have penned. I think we all have a vision of what the ideal world should look like. But in reality it falls far short of our dreams. Excellent write!!! You take care, Sandy
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This is a great poem you wrote. Thank you for writing in your authors comment box. Best of luck in my contest
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A very good poem,It makes you think about what we sometimes Daydream about.Well done
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