To walk or to run
To sing or to dance
To be deep in love,
Or some say romance.
People will look
With a different perspective.
Then look up at their lover
With a feeling, infective.
Seeing the faces,
And feelings within,
Some might say,
Its a way to begin
A new life to live.
So Love those so dear,
Love those who are not.
Love is a feeling
To not be forgot.
A contest entry
- Give Me [[RAW EMOTION]] by brittany.geeze.
525 points, ended January 8, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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great I loved how the lines just kept flowing it was really great
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Exactly, this is exactly how love effects you! So true and you are different, I think in a way, when you fall in love. It's like that phrase they use, 'when you love someone, you know. When your in love with someone, everyone else knows.'
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Hmm. I never really gave any thought to an emotional love write. Well don.
Thanks for entering.
-brittany-
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I like it and it's rhymie but it is a bit confusing. good luck with the contest!
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