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shawl of magic

heaven's shawl of magic
blankets the sky,
its iced shafts dancing across
moonlit, scudding clouds

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unfortunately my caps lock isn't working but i will remedy the problem asap.

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  • ixtli
    December 29, 2007

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    This is so beautiful! It was so perfect because I was looking out my window right before I read this. Great poem! You wove words together magically to create a serene feeling.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 28, 2007

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    Truly poetic and coated with wondrous imagery... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.