Rewinding
to pretty words
and hands held through sunshine ~
fairy floss kisses
left on silken lips
and futures built with a promise of something
so much more than this.
Can I go back?
Author notes
Subject - TIME...
A contest entry
- Free Verse, No Line Limits, Subject - TIME... by Cupcrazy.
1000 points, ended January 15, 2008, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A beautiful look at the substance of time and all the emotion that fills it. Hugs, Bunny
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Beautiful
We all wish we could step back into the past at times in our lives...This is just beautifully written...
Best of Luck
Blessings
~~Cheryl~~ -
Time is a precious thing. I wish more people could see that. Well written
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