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Borealis






Rippling across the plane of my heart,
you are the light that causes my soul
to shimmer.





©2007 rous
12-28-07




Author notes

Written for the contest: This feeling by Lavender Butterfly
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2383608

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  • just mercedes gold member
    December 29, 2007
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    beautiful, an instant moment captured.


    • Elrenia
      December 29, 2007
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      Thank you! I admit I did not think it one of my best, but perhaps I was mistaken. I appreciate your reading and commenting, not to forget the clappy dudes.

      rous


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 28, 2007

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    This is just beautiful, such a pleasure to read... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.


    • Elrenia
      December 28, 2007
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      You are quite welcome. Thank you for such a lovely picture.