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Slowly...

Slowly...

 

Slowly I drift away

With a hand full of sorrow

and a life time of despair

I surrender myself to my fate ahead

slowly....

Its getting dark,

my head is spinning,

my life, in scatered images

flash through my head.

Slowly...

Then my kids,

I see them now,

a warmth flows through me,

happy memories come to me.

is it to late to turn arround.

slowly...

My eyes are heavy now,

My heart beats softly

I am so tired...

I think I will sleep.

Slowly I drift away...

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user name is aussieb...BE RAW...Hope this is what you are looking...

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  • brittany.geeze
    January 1, 2008

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    I suppose it is very emotional, but not as strong as I would hope. It is strong, but I was hoping for a more... i dont know how to explain it- except for EMO. lol but yeah. Thanks for entering, i enjoyed reading this.
    -Keep Writing-
    -brittany:lee-


  • My Souls Reflection gold member
    December 28, 2007
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    Fantastic

    That is a beautiful write, has a great flow and very emotive. I can relate to it on so many levels. The more I read your work, the more I feel I'm getting to know you..slowly.
    Good luck in the contest, it's time you got some recognition for your work...Anne