guys have there own life and they dont thik about others
they say one thing but do the other
they make you think one thing but it always gets broken
they are all whores and like you but doesnt want that commitment
theres no feeling for them anymore theres no happyness
i like the old days when all of them were good and they all liked to feel for you but they dont anymore
people have there own life and dont think
they dont have a meaning of others
they control everythign you do
when life gets me down...
theres no way out
i have nothing to show for no emotion
all my emotion all my excitment has gone away
i cant get excited i cant get happy
when things are happening i just sit and smile
i look like i am fine but i am not
deep down inside i look like i want to die
if i knew how to kill myself i would
when i get hurt i like the pain
when i see blood i like it
when i cry its feels normal
i hate feeling so depressed
i remeber a time when i was happy
i remeber a time when everything mad me smile
i love the happy days
they are so far away
even friends dont excit me anymore
only thing that helps is a cigratte
i have nothing that cures that urge
i hate not having one but i hate having one
i hate the life
i hate having no emotion
i have feeling so dead in side
if things were they way i wanted to be then i would look the same as the way i feel but no i dont i feel so dead but i look so alive. theres never a end to this feeling it will never go away it will never stop
Author notes
JoleneMarie
BE RAW
A contest entry
- Give Me [[RAW EMOTION]] by brittany.geeze.
525 points, ended January 8, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like being a whore, its mantastic, like monopoly
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you never make sense.
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great poem
but it really sucks that people do that
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yup its what happens in my life daily or what i think daily
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Okay so I finally read this and I regret not having read it earlie. I give you KUDOS for being so open because the only times I was ever this open was when i knew my friends couldnt read this, jolene I love you and i know you know that- so theres really not anything i can say except for i feel the same way- you're a finalist for sure! and not just because youre my friend, but because you did exactly what i asked- you let the walls down and you let yourself be raw.
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Awww you entered in my contest!!! **huge hug** well i didnt read it all the way through yet but i love you for entering!!! lol i'll read it later today cuz im going to the library so i can apply to places with wireless rather than dial up! slow ass computer!
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