It's a cold dark night
As i stand here alone
No street light
Im on my own
Night stays and doesnt want to go
When will the sun rise and help me through my problems
Will somebody help me?
I hate being on my own
The coldness makes my feel if there's no one around
All quiet and no sound
I wrap myself with my arms,trying to warm up
The wind howles through the allyways
Making me more uncomfortable as I walk along this empty street
Who knows when this night will end
As my eyes widen when I turn this bend
Shining lights in my eyes,blinding me
I feel to my knees in shock
who knows what will happen
I awoke later on in the middle of an allyway
It's a cold dark night
As i stand here alone
No street light
Im on my own
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Ant, ;l
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orhhhh this is a really sad poem... the way you have crafted your words means that the reader certainly feels what you feel and can cry along with you this dear is a very hard thing to do very well done xxx
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tyvm
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not the best but good for a first try=)
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