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Lose Weight

Lessen the amount I eat,

Obtain a healthy mind,

Stop eating all the junk I do,

Exercise and restraint combined,

 

Walk more often, get out of the car,

Eat fruit and fibre too,

Ignore the sugary cravings,

Getting healthy is well overdue,

Hope for me in 2008,

To keep my promises true.

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  • Little Feather Greeters member
    January 17

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    Thank you for your entry

    A new years resolution I am sure a lot of us have made. Well done. Good flow and structure. The lines flowed into each other and you followed the rules perfectly.

    Happy New Year and God Bless
    Tammy

  • meanderingbear gold member
    January 4

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    The acrostic looks as if it meets the requirements as I understand them and I think you did a terrific job with your poem. Best of luck to you in your endeavors at losing weight...soon your jeans will be falling off!
    Best of luck in the contest, too!

    Carolyn


  • earthstar
    December 30, 2007

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    Very well done. It is very inspiring now it got me thinking. I agree getting fit it a great theme for the New Year. Good luck in the contest.