The only one
That, my darling, is what you are
The only one
The good, the bad, the strife, the fun
In my mind whether near or far
Forevermore my shining star
The only one.
Author notes
Title 14.The Only One
In a list
A contest entry
- An Abundance of Titles by Mad As Rabbits.
700 points, ended December 30, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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Good job overall, simple but beautiful. You have a couple typos though, "The good, the bad, the strife, the fuh" Personally, I don't know what "the fuh" is and in the last line, I'm pretty sure it should be the only one instead of the only ons. But besides that, great job!
Thanks for entering.
Love Always,
Caroline
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