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Dream On

Dream on man, dream on;
To find a woman like this ,
Is there anything in your head but bone?
To think she would put up,
With a slob like you?
The only way it might be,
Is if you treat her mean.
If you do that,
She should ‘wipe your slate clean’!
Put you where you can’t hurt ANYTHING !

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Truth be known, that kind of man needs...... neutralized.

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 28, 2007

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    Excellent Write Dear I wish you the best of luck in the contest Who are you talking about anyway Drunkenram Uhhh I see the comment below AHHHH


    • Me a poet-maybe
      December 28, 2007
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      Actually, I was equating the pics. caption to what it reminded me of....
      A drunken slob who thinks the world revolves around him and doesn't care at all for anything else. The type who would make an abuser. The "wipe your slate...." was a mild way of saying, do him in...
      I just couldn't write the comment rhat first came to mind. Let's just say I have no use for anyone who would expect to be 'catered to' like that in the caption.