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Young lissom bodies
caressing the sand
gilded by the sun,
god's and goddesses
they are so strong.
Swift as the wind
playful as dolphins
they ride the waves,
slaves to their youth.
Seduced by the breeze
and the fierce caress
of the foam
they find salted lips,
exalt in the thrill
of each kiss,
fire to the bones.
Locked in embrace
they blissfully lie as one
on the sun drenched shore,
the fever cooled by the tide.

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  • Swan song gold member
    January 1, 2008

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    Excellent! Very lovely. Infact you get an extra funny bunny!!!!!


  • PersephoneInWinter
    December 28, 2007

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    my first impression is that these are young gods, doing what gods do best, lol.

    i think that this is beautifully written and radiating love!

    Great write and good luck in my contest!

    LXF