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The first sight of miss right

I was on my way home from the commotion of the day

Never have I been so lost and alone.

Until I got on the bus,

Looked across to my left

 

where the most beautiful girl to my breath away

She smiled which enlightened the fire of my heart once more,

I couldn't move,

It was soon my time to go,

I wanted to stay and speak

 

but the confidence in my heart said "no"

I saw her again this time in college

 

she smiled at me for the second time

I was once again lost for words

I had butterfly's in my stomach at that moment

and I hared the peaceful sound of tweeting birds

black was the colour of her hair,

She wore Gothic clothing

she seemed like a rebel without a cause

yet everytime I saw her

She could make my heart pause

If you are out there please baby girl

I need to know your name

you have my heart going crazy

I have never felt the same

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  • infinitechaos07
    January 6, 2008
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    This is really cute! Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck!


  • Ephiphany
    December 28, 2007

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    This is beautiful....

    Maybe you should print this out on some pretty paper, slip it in an envelope and sneak it in her bookbag or near her seat...Put "this is for u" on the front...what do you think.