Entering the room
Glowing with her glee
Everyone stops and stares
To see the girl with rosy cheeks
They gasp and whisper to each other
Make her blush while
dancing along
To the music
Later on the night is ending
The prince comes up
And sees her staring
He asks for one dance
To shy for words
She steps closer
While she dances with the prince
They gasp and whisper to each other
Make her blush while
dancing along
To the music
The night is clearly over
The sun has come and risen
She must go home
Before G-d misses her
So long for
Until the next full moon
A contest entry
- A good Lyric by Kiddy.
385 points, ended January 7, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful write...
The title says it all... Your angel is really beautiful... This poem is forcing me to eavesdrop and see what happens in the ballroom... Well, the final stanza kept me in surprise, during my first read, so that I went for a second read - penultimate and ante-penultimate lines helped me guess that there is a hidden somber subject carried by this poem....
Beautiful Poem... This poem has a power to transmit its idea successfully and uniquely...
Thanks for sharing
love
-Kiddy
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