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Time seems to be standing still

Time seems to be standing still
I am wanting nothing but to feel

I see the moon light on your face
where have we gone what is this place?

We're all alone, no one's here
Is my imagionation running with no fear?

Everything is gone except for you
What did I do to get to you?

What should I do? What should I say?
I don't know what to do, there is no way

You saved me from unreality
Cause you showed me whats really here,
that its only You and Me

But what do we do now?
We're here and we feel something
but we dont know how

To tell you would be under estimating its impact
I want to keep this forever intact
Is this what I think it is?

I look for the answers from above
before I say that its love

Author notes

I liked both the quote and picture, but i decided to go with the picture, its about love from either a new friend or a lost friend!

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  • Soulful Woman silver member
    January 21, 2008
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    Beautifully written. Congratulations on the Gold.
    Soulful Woman


  • Lady Australis silver member
    January 21, 2008
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    contgrats on gold sweety
    this is awsome


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 3, 2008

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    wow this is an amazing take on the picturea and i love the way it makes the reader think. its powerfully written well done and best of luck

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 3, 2008
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    wow this is an amazing take on the picturea and i love the way it makes the reader think. its powerfully written well done and best of luck

  • Stacy-b
    December 28, 2007
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    i love it

    its a great poem I love the entire thing

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 28, 2007
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    Picture: http://bleedingbride.deviantart.com/art/ISOLATION-34420490

    Quote: And as you sleep in the silken petals of serenity your dreams will unfold.

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