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Devilish and Angelic

She sits there,
neither dark nor light.
but a mixture of the two.
"a good balance" some say.

She smiles and shakes her head.
If anyone know knows not to measure someone's heart,
It would this girl,
From personal experience.

The actions of her past,
they drove her into the night and stayed.
Past saviors have tried to pull her out.
All but a few have failed, and they are now her friends.

Now, out of her own hellish abyss,
she sits as if the embodiment of Yin and Yang.
though her outward appearance is darkness,
what she says and does is both good and evil.

Author notes

yeah its a work in progress i'm sure. but basically i was inspired by the contest that was for dark/love/etc etc. the things i'm into (haha go figure).

but basically, its a poem about myself and my friends who have stuck around throughout the years giving me a hand pulling me out of my own hellish abyss. (long story about that)

anyways, enjoy the poem.

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  • Systems Malfunction
    December 28, 2007

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    Interesting poem. Not going to say its the best I've ever read however I enjoy your personalization of and interesting form. Good luck in the contest!