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[ Bite back this bureaucratic bile ]

Bite back this bureaucratic bile
You rules mean nothing when I’m in denial
I’m a so-called ‘rebel without reason’
I’m sick and dirty; I’m full of treason
I’m not like her…no?
          I’m just so plain?
Yes she must be ‘special’ if you know her name…

And yours?

Yes its in C A P I T A L S across my arm

Its in my head it screams its charms
It fills me up and weighs me down
Its two thousand gallons of ‘let-me-drown’
It’s a joke and laugh at my expense
Its 3 long years of recompense.
Floorboards black
                    trying.not.to.move.

It’s a marathon I’m bound to loose
I’ll give you my best *good girl* impression…
I’ll give you mirrored (derorrim) indiscretion

I can give you nothing.
[[empty]]

This tortured life of confidant
This “tell your secrets” dying plant
A stupid dream of being noticed
A spark of hope, the damned remotest
A silken lie I wish you’d tell
But no…no hope…
No chance in hell. 

Author notes

dedicated to oscar....you nasty little sod

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  • silverfish
    January 2, 2008

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    one killer dagger stroke of a poem. in particular, i like " . . .'special' if you know her name." i'd lable this poem dark/inspired. -r

    p.s. -- so glad i'm not oscar.


  • Laura-Critchley
    December 29, 2007
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    That was f'ing amazing, hun.

    Great write!


  • Sle3p
    December 28, 2007

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    This was exactly what I was looking for. A wonderful poem . thank you for sharing this with me. I really enjoyed reading this truly. My favorite line was probably 'Yes its in C A P I T A L S across my arm' cause thats the truth with me. thanks i really love this.


    Fluffy


    • Slinky-milinky
      December 29, 2007
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      Thank you for the great comment and trophy fluffy! -i really enjoyed this contest. xxx