the tears are coming to an end
not because hes out of my heart,
simply because I'm at our secret place
happiness fills my heart
thinking of all the kisses i stole
and the look of love in your eyes
every night sneaking off
to our secret place
for one last time to link our two hands
thinking of when you held me
not just a simple embrace,
but when you touched my heart
and realized we were the same
i still remember
laying in your arms
looking in your eyes
and you whispering
that i was your only one
i doubted that,
no one ever loved me
so i fought the urge
to say those three words back
in the dead silence
you looked at me for the last time
walked away with tears streaming down your face
just like that you were gone
i realized you love me
it was to late
next thing i new
i was standing looking down on you still body
icy cold
i whispered i love you
but you would never know
i couldn't stop the tears
i ran to our secret place
dwelling in the thoughts
i can never leave our secret place
because i know in our secret place
our hands are forever entwined
Author notes
23. Our secret place
A contest entry
- Titles, Titles and More Titles!!! by HeavensNewestAngel.
425 points, ended January 5, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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its interesting how just being in a place where someone you loved and lost spent time in, can make you feel like their here again. I do this often, in that breif moment when i am in his place, i can feel him with me, and for one second , i feel complete. nice job babe.
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This is a great poem. This brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for putting in your authors comment box the title number. Best of luck in my contest
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thank you
im glad that you were able to feel the emotion in this poem
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