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Life's fluid surge

Life's fluid surge
through corpse,
damned from birth,
as flesh decays



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Prompt: One Amazing Stanza

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  • klassy lassy
    January 3, 2008

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    Not sure I can hold this one long... but life does appear damned sometimes. So what is substance? ~ Karen


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    December 28, 2007
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    Oooh This is hard, but I like it.


  • Cherokee
    December 28, 2007
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    eeeeeeeeeek...