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Untamed

Lush velvet arms
                                  submit themselves...

With tender touch and tandem friends

                              each breaches the outer banks.

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  • ellipsist
    January 12, 2008
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    ooooh... I especially love your use of the word "tandem"

    wonderful composition - clever, creative!


    • liquidmindforever gold member
      January 12, 2008
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      Thanks lickerish for stopping by to read UNTAMED, for the comments and the happy faces.
      Blessings ofpeace,love,light
      liquid


  • BellaD
    January 4, 2008
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    Great poem!

    Lovely job on the prompt. Succinct and well-written. Congratulations on the honorable mention.

    • liquidmindforever gold member
      January 5, 2008
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      Hi Bella,
      Thank you for stopping in to read UNTAMED, for the comments and the happy faces.
      Blessings of love, peace and light
      liquid


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 28, 2007

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    So clever and immensely creative... Thanks ever so much for sharing this... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.

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