Dancing along memories,
I chance to pause on you,
remembering good times,
and what you put me through.
Plans once cemented,
because I thought you cared,
were quickly lost in quicksand
when feelings were not shared,
Suffice to say you've faded,
with other thoughts now jaded.
©2007
Author notes
Written for the contest: Prompt/10 entries by AliceinPoetryLand
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2383530
A contest entry
- Prompt/10 entries by AliceinPoetryLand.
600 points, ended December 28, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A critical comment is invited
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An excellent take on the prompt. Yes a love that hasn't been returned fully certainly can jade our thoguhts in the future. Thank you so much for youe entry.
Gaylene
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