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the Gypsy

I saw the waves roll across the sea ,
and crash upon the shore,
then return with just a sigh...

Ive seen kings bend down ,
and touch the earth ,
and fullfill his nations dreams...

~ and the gypsy looked at me ~

Ive seen the barren blessed ,
as a life began ,
with a sound of new born's cry...

Ive seen armies ,
drop down their swords ,
and ask the reason why...

~ and the gypsy looked at me ~

I thought I had loved as much as I could,
until the gypsy looked at me...


I planted a seed ,
on rocky ground,
now sit beneath its shade...

Ive seen dreams so old ,
come to be thru kindness,
and a helping hand...

~ and the gypsy looked at me ~

Ive seen a nation unite ,
to to help the fight ,
of a battler on his knees...

When many said ,
they cannot be fed ,
a minstrel let them eat...

~ and the gypsy looked at me ~

Now all Ive seen ,
and all Ive done ,
pales when I compare ,
the gypsy holding me....


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  • Ravenblood
    December 30, 2007

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    Nice... Like the repeditive gypsy line.. although you should fix up the ive into I've and that sorta stuff.
    otherwise good
    keep up the good work

    Claire-Anne