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My Sweet Prince

Each day I wait and hope you'll come,

To rescue me from here,

From boredom, dullness, misery,

My heart breaks with every tear,

 

I know you're somewhere out there,

Looking just for me,

Come save my broken soul dear,

Please come and set me free,

 

I'll hold out my hand to you,

You'll take it, hold me tight,

Then place me gently on your steed,

We'll escape into the night,

 

Happiness washes over me,

With every thought of you,

I'll always watch for my sweet prince,

Who'll take me to pastures new. 

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I wait for my prince to come. Maybe one day !!!

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    May 16

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    Hold me tight...place me on your gentle steed. How romantic as I like the same thing...Dreams and fantasy
    your lover exists--just keep Dreaming and Believing!!

  • Love.Dream.Believe.
    December 29, 2007

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    Wow...
    I really like this one, it sounds just like me...
    I'm waiting for my prince charming to show up also, I just wish he'd come soon...
    The rhythm and rhyme in this is consistent and very good, I like it.
    The story is very good and well written.
    Overall it is an excellent poem, I enjoyed it very much...
    Thanks for entering and best of luck! =)