Dappled light, beech kisses,
from shadows to feathered caress.
Choreography creates illusions
invisible to the naked eye.
Author notes
The link for the graphic provided for the contest by our host: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2383508
A contest entry
- Imagery Contest by Tirrell.
570 points, ended January 3, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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excellent
Very well done. Congratulations on your silver.
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I like this short write alot, a pair of couplets
a bit abstract, the imagery is delightful, as the words sound lush and soft when read aloud. very nice.
thank you for entering and much luck!
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You know me.... I love short poems. Exceptional piece.
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The image you have painted with your words is wonderful and amazing. So few words and yet they
speak of the choreography of nature, done by the
hand of God.
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