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Smitten

Black leather jacket,
stubble on your face,
Bright green eyes
that sear right through me

tempted by attraction,
pulled by temptation
wanting to give in
to a primal compulsion

The heat sets in
and the ride starts up
flying free at last
giddy with the love marks
to prove it

I never said a word,
my face said it all
confidently I take one
last satisfying lick
and leave my card
on your dick.

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  • Blueskywonder
    December 28, 2007

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    That certainly hits the mark

    An intense primal piece