I believe that you'll never be lost
For you never leave my memory
To our late night talks
Always giving me assisstance
What heart you have
Not only seeing my value in my poetry
Accepted me as a person
Treasured what I said,
And valued my heart
I might have been no one
Your love has never left me.
I know for a fact, you live on forever
Love your etirenity
A contest entry
- Open Christmas Contest by Lionsloves Lair.
1750 points, ended January 10, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
If you know me, let me know if i deserve happiness?
Comments
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This is beautiful! I see he must have passed.. I'm so sorry you lost such a great friend!!
Lovely tribute to him
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A wonderful tribute to a wonderful man, poet, and friend...he always had the time, and a listening ear, then gave wonderful advice or just his shoulder to lay upon, giving comfort when needed...
Thank you for this super entry, full of aliteration and tidy flow of lines
~Lilac
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Yes, you have summed up Tim quite well! He was truly one of a kind! Thanks for this entry into the contest! I know Tim is watching over us one and all with love and pride!
Best of luck in this contest!
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my darling one you truly do deserve happiness and I know Tim is always looking down upon you even in your darkest hours giving you his paws of love and entwining your spirit making you whole. He loved unconditionally and even when your thoughts seem idle angelically he's guiding each one of us on our poetic journeys. well done and much love always xoxoxoxxooxox
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