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I'm Sorry My Love

Please forgive me
For what I am about to do,
I know this is wrong of me
But I'm at my end,
My last resort.
I can't take this any longer,
The pain, the anger,
The sadness, the hurt,
I can't stand this any more
I have to get rid of it!
I have to scream, kick,
Stomp, cry, something,
Anything, to make this go away!
I know I promised,
And I hate to break it
But it has to be this way.
I'm sorry my love,
Can you ever forgive me?
The red lines I am creating
Will only make it worse
But atleast it will
Take my mind off everything
If only for a little while.
I love you so much
And I know I'm only hurting you
But I hope that one day
You will understand.
I'm sorry my love,
Can you ever forgive me?

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  • XxpuddlesxX
    January 6, 2008
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    love is a hard thing to deal with. especially when it is new


  • Lost Memory
    December 31, 2007

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    love has a hard shell, hard to break, but when broken, hard to forgive... there always is a way, you just have to find it.
    Its a great poem, and i really like, good job, keep it up

    ~Nick


  • fallenangel671
    December 29, 2007

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    awesome none the less, the emotions were deep and I loved this,
    keep writing

    ~Ashley~<3