Hold my breath, close my eyes, Here I sit asking you why...
Why can't you just be here with me?
In your eyes be the only one I see?
This shit has got me trippin'
This run around has got me spun.
I feel like I'm in this shit alone.
Unable to depend on ya when I really need ya close.
Got me twisted with the pain you force me to embrace.
Getting tired of this hurt covered up with love.
Full of pride and can't just let go.
Tonight you leave without a good-bye.
As you drive away, I don't even try to understand why.
I don't hold out hope you will return,
Know you too well to let the hopeful thinking overtake me.
Wonder if somewhere on the interstate you make that u-turn....
Drive back to me, let the stupid shit go.
Try to harden a heart that already shattered,
Pouring out my soul when it doesn't even matter.
Sitting at my desk writing this about you,
Tired of asking questions with no returned answer.
A contest entry
- What Ever You Want!! by GypsyEyes.
700 points, ended January 21, 2008, 44 entries
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hey guess what? i liked this! and i was like this is so my last relationship...except i drove her home and pulled off not her...bitch made me give a ride home then dumped me! WTF? i liked the profanity! that's how you feel! let it out! good write!
~NineTailedFox -
Sad,But Nice Write
A Very Nice Poem. I Think It Cld. Probably Be Just As Good Without All Of 'The Profanity', But I Do Understand, Where U R Coming From..Sad, and I Hope If This Is A True-Poem-4-U, All Things Get Much Better For You...Deep, Emotional, Write...'God Be with You'...Love, Shirley ann shaw-raytown,mo.........
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