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Shoulder ride...

I see the butterfly flung far a field,
We shall catch him,
Young eyes see for old,
A grandmother loves best.

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  • micol
    January 17, 2008

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    Beautiful, gentle, and highly evocative of times spend long ago with my grandmother; and more recently with my grandchildren. Line three captures the essence well.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 28, 2007

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    This is just lovely and such a pleasure to read... Thanks ever so much for sharing this... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.


  • Shirley Shaw
    December 27, 2007

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    Nice-Write

    A Short, and Very Sweet Poem..My Fav' Kind..It Tells A Story All In Itself...'God Bless'...Love, Shirley ann shaw-raytown,mo................................