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A Stanza in Mind

I crept alongside the mist of mind
where knowledge knows not suffering
to know the reason why bird
seeks mother and remember this
in twilight.

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  • BellaD
    January 30, 2008

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    I like this and I read the prompt for the contest, so I am wondering...is there more to this? If so I would like to read it. Nice job of keeping it simple and using metaphor.


  • Mallig gold member
    December 28, 2007
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    This is one amazing stanza alright. So spiritual, and meaningful. Good luck in the contest!


  • Cherokee
    December 27, 2007
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    has a mystic feel...